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I wrote another, what do you all think

(Topic created on: 06-07-2024 11:33 PM)
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terry24
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LebeseP
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It's nice, I just feel like the last line of the first paragraph should've started the second paragraph. The last two lines of the second paragraph should've made a 3 line paragraph with the first line of paragraph 3. Trust me, they make the same sound.

I'm also a poet, you can check mine too 1662598042478_1000000909_1677789301.jpg